Wednesday, November 6, 2013

Prelim Task Evaluation


Prelim Task Evaluation

Task Brief: Continuity task involving filming and editing a character opening a door, crossing a room and sitting down in a chair opposite another character, with whom he/she then exchanges a couple of lines of dialogue. This task should demonstrate match on action, shot reverse shot and the 180-degree rule.

Evaluation:

Our prelim task followed the plan we had and included the relevant shots. We started our prelim with a crotch shot (cutting of the head to add suspense). We continue to add suspense by only showing certain parts of the body by using cut in shot. We then use Over the shoulder shots to show conversations. We also used another cut in of the envelope to show its importance.

The thing we did the best was using shots to create the suspense and interest as the audience would want to find out what happens. 

Something that went wrong was our change In positioning of liam when he was walking down the corridor. 

Thelma & Louise Essay Improved


Essay: ‘Analyse the representation of women in Thelma and Louise
In this essay I will analyse the representation of women in the film ‘Thelma and Louise’, during which women are represented in different ways.

I will first look at the way that the Thelma and Louise are represented at the start of the film. Firstly Thelma is presented as stereotypical housewife. We see her in the kitchen (stereotypically the woman’s place) preparing the washing and making her husband a cup of coffee. Also she is seen wearing a dress which is something we would expect girls to wear[U1] . However we also start to see her challenging these female conventions. For example when we see her packing for the holiday she just chucks everything in there not neat and tidy. Also we see her packing a gun, something you wouldn’t see a woman stereotypically with. On the other hand Louise is the opposite of Thelma. Louise is a ‘tom boy’ and doesn’t wear ‘girly clothes’, we see her mainly in a shirt and trousers; typically something men wear. She also smokes which back when this film is set you wouldn’t expect to see them smoking. However she also follows some stereotypes. We see her working at a diner as a waitress, something you would expect to see a woman doing, and she packs neat and tidy something that women are stereotypically better at than men[U2] .

will next look at them when they are at the truck stop. Thelma is shown as the woman who is weak and vulnerable (a way in which some people view women). She is seen about to be raped reinforcing the view that women are vulnerable and weak. This also helps to build the view of Thelma as a ‘girly girl’. Following Laura Muleys theory of Male gaze, the fact that the man went for Thelma rather than Louise suggests that he was looking at her body, following Muleys theory of male gaze. Louise[U3]  on the other hand, is shown as the strong female, where she defends Thelma and shoots the would be rapist. This goes against the female stereotype that they are weak and vulnerable, challenging conventions once again[U4] . Also to reinforce her ‘tom boy’ personality when she is sorting herself out in the bathroom with the other women she leaves suggesting that she doesn’t enjoy it much, whereas Thelma is seen constantly applying makeup[U5] , following that female stereotype that women need to look pretty. Also she doesn’t follow Muleys theory as she isn’t paid much attention to.

The next point I will look at is the point in which Thelma and Louise switch roles. This particular point is right after J.D. and Thelma have sex. This shows the stereotype that women want sex; as Thelma is married and sleeping with J.D.. After we see Thelma as a totally different person. She has lost her dress and has donned tight trousers and a denim jacket, ‘tom boy’ clothes[U6] . She also has a more confident attitude and feels somewhat elevated by her experience reinforcing the stereotype that women live for sex. We later see the change in Louise when they learn that J.D. has stolen their only supply of money. When they learn of J.D.’s treachery Louise breaks down in tears at the loss of her life’s savings. Crying is generally a stereotype reserved for women and also something we would not expect to see Louise doing[U7] . By this act it reverses the roles of Thelma and Louise as Thelma keeps a cool head and tells Louise what to do shifting the power from Louise to Thelma, a crucial point in the film in relation to their relationship. You could also apply Muleys’ theory as a man would at this point turn their advances possibly to Louise as she is the ‘weaker prey[U8] ’.

As the film goes on we see that Thelma and Louise have become equals. We see that Thelma is also driving the car now whereas earlier on in the play it is only Louise seen driving the car. Driving the car is generally seen as something that ‘men should do’ so here we see that they are both now challenging stereotypes[U9] . We see this big change again in Thelma when she robs a store and holds the police man at gunpoint. This is generally seen as a male stereotype, henceforth Thelma is challenging the stereotypes set against her and suggesting that she has power; to be able to do that. Also we see that Louise has shifted from her brief time spent as a ‘woman’. Also we see Louise selling her jewellery suggesting she is challenging almost all stereotypes of women, as she isn’t wearing ‘girly things’. Now they are both also not following Muleys’ theory as they are both people that men may not pay attention as they aren’t a ‘Girly Girl’ and possibly won’t attract the gaze of males as much[U10] . 
Also by this point they challenge stereotypes further by: firing guns, swearing and drinking whisky. These are generally perceived as something men do, showing how they are further challenging conventions set against them.

Overall by the end of the play we see that the representation of women is that they are strong individuals that can challenge stereotypes and carry out men tasks and hobbies.


A number of focused, detailed points Jordan. You have analysed each character well and made some clear comparisons

Comment on 1,2 and 3.

Comment 1: Thelma presents herself as a bored housewife. She has messy hair in the morning and isn’t wearing any make-up. When we see her in the car with Louise she has done her hair and is now wearing make-up, suggesting she has no need of it in the house, as she doesn’t leave there.
Comment 2: We see both the women wearing white tops. This suggests that they are both still ‘innocent’. This would follow Muley’s theory as men would see this as a sign of ‘easy prey’ and would make more advancements to them.
Comment 3: While in the bar Thelma acted like a stereotypical teenage girl by flirting with every man in the bar this would have attracted many men’s attention. This would fulfil Muley’s theory as men would be averting their gaze to look at her.

 [U1]Can you also add a comment about how she presents herself, hairstyle or make up?
 [U2]Explain the significance of both women wearing white tops.
 [U3]Explain how Thelma behaved in the bar.
 [U4]Good comparison
 [U5]Comparison between the characters
 [U6]Good analysis of costume
 [U7]Good detail
 [U8]Good point
 [U9]Good point
 [U10]Good argument against Mulvey’s theory

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